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Wednesday, August 28, 2019

volcano

Kaboom i am on a bout but i hear animals howling and an earthquake with lava coming out the lava almost hit the engine i am so scared i felt the burning hot water because of the lava i see people swimming for their lives and the waves are getting stronger i was thinking  a tsunami is coming. And a ten foot wave came so i got my speed bout and rid it i survived luckly the end not true

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  1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2019 at 11:17 AM

    Medal:I like the way you used onomatopoeia words.
    Medal:I like the way you used that there was a tsunami in your blog.
    Mission:Maybe you could not say "I FELT the the burning" Maybe? BY MIKHANYA!!!

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  2. ArloSeptember 4, 2019 at 12:59 PM

    Hello Brody. What an amazing story about vocanos. I liked how you made the writing nice and big so that we can see it. My favourite part of the story was the bit where you got on your speed bout. What was yours.

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