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Tuesday, August 13, 2019

gross food

this week for writing we had a choice to write about landing on the moon or about a disgusting dinner. we were learning to write using present tense.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Brody. I liked your amazing story. It was so cool I desited to comment on it. I thought you chose cool types on writing. next time you coud make you story a bit bigger and remember to yous capital letters

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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