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Thursday, August 22, 2019

alien invason

today we had to betend to be the alien

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  1. Hello Brody. I realy like this story of yours. I think it's the best one yet. my favrourite bit of the story was when about the flying sorsa. I liked it because the bit where everyone got recude. I also liked how you said you ship got ret I loved that part because you put so much betail into it like when you said it got rect in the air and you put capital letters and full stops. bye I hope to comment again.

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