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Friday, March 22, 2019

six story sentinse

this week in witting we  wrote a six story sentinse about creating a character and adding detail our fows was on creating sentences we learnt that the four crifena of a sentence are...  

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  1. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 3:17 PM

    Hi Brody- Miss Goslin here!
    Thank you for sharing your six sentence story from last term. Your charactor called 'Ayla Morgan' sounds very cool. I like how she does magic to get away from her enemies. Next time to make this story sound even better, you should self-check your work for punctuation. For example the story is one big sentence so you could read it and add in full stops when needed.
    I hope you reply.
    Miss Goslin

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